My Narrative

The Terrible Fishing Trip

One weekend Craig & his mates went fishing. Everything was going smoothly until Zylus ruined the trip and took the motor off the boat for one of his evil plans - this plan was to keep his friends there for the night.

While Zylus was going to bed he started laughing  to himself in a very evil way he said to himself that he was going to keep his freinds overnight. Craig and his mates stayed up and waited for what they were watching on tv to finish.

The waves crashed against the boat rocking the vessel violently. As it was getting darker and darker they waited and waited some more.

Suddenly, what sounded like a train came at us. It was a rescue boat.They brought a motor with them and gave the motor to Craig and his mates to get to shore. When they got to shore they cleaned the boat up and didn’t finish cleaning up until 6:00am.

Zylus got up and cried with disappointment  because his plan didn’t work. Craig and his mates decided to keep their friendship with Zylus  because their friendship is more important than a evil plan. They all left to go and have BIG sleep and relax after their big trip. No fish were caught because of Zylus.

Better luck next time.

The End

 

By Joshua K