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Tuesday 11 November 2014

The Huge splash

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The huge splash

Boom! splash!  that is the sound of a boy jumping off the wharf into the smell of gas.My thoughts for him is if he jumps too much I’m afraid that he can get very sick.But it looked like he’s going to be a man.

As he jumped he held his nose very tight and then he would jump off the wharf.My feelings for him is when he jumps in the water he’s looks brave.

I think he can be a great jumper.
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